Thursday, September 24th, 2009...4:10 am
Sense Poem by Maisie
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Sense Poem
I see the mountains standing tall,
The trees swaying like a swing,
The blue, clear sky,
The children running rapidly on the sandy, dusty road,
I hear the birds singing and squawking,
The children talking and laughing,
The water trickling from the tap,
The parents talking to one another,
I smell the sand mixed with the dry mud,
The flowers smell of perfume,
The dust tickling my nose,
I touch the bucket hard and square,
The water warm on my skin,
The sandy road rough and dry,
The sun roasting hot burning on my skin,
I taste the warm water,
The dust floating to my mouth,
The water warm but refreshing.

4 Comments
September 24th, 2009 at 4:16 am
heyy
lovely poem
September 24th, 2009 at 9:48 am
Well done Maisie, this peom is lovely. Made me think of Gairloch.
Heather
September 29th, 2009 at 6:37 am
What a lovely poem Maisie! I could almost picture myself there
October 2nd, 2009 at 7:05 am
I love that poem i love the words that you
described it with!
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