Thursday, September 24th, 2009...4:15 am
What happened before by Tiana
What Happened Before
My name is Asebech I’m nine years old.
I do a lot of work in one day; I have to wake up at 6.30am. I have to collect cold water. The nearest place I can get water from is six tiring miles away. I have to carry a big heavy bottle to the river. I can hear the rushing cold water. It’s quite busy at the river. I quickly fill my jug and head off.
The hot, bright, yellow, shining sun beams over me I get hotter and hotter. I’ve got two more miles to go and I have to keep on going. I can almost taste the water in my mouth even though I don’t have any in my mouth.
The cold heavy water keeps me cool.
I can see my small weak house just along the dusty dirty road. I think to myself it’s not long till I get back. It’s not much trouble for you to get water but it is for me. I can feel my back getting sore but I’m nearly home. I can smell the soft green warm grass.
I can now see the busy school kids rushing about. I wish that I was down there but we can’t afford the expensive school maybe one day will go if we get some money

2 Comments
September 24th, 2009 at 9:46 am
Brilliant story Tiana,sometimes we forget how lucky we all are!
Heather
October 26th, 2009 at 5:46 am
Tiana, that kid sure wasn’t you i hope love the story the way you wrote it makes you think of all the kids like that
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